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Joke About a Wig Theft

Posted on September 23, 2019 by Joe Toplyn

The joke:

Thieves in Florida stole up to $80,000 in merchandise from a wig warehouse. Police are thoroughly combing through the crime scene because they want the thieves toupee.

How I wrote it:

I thought this news item was worth turning into a joke because it’s attention-getting, an important characteristic for a joke topic. It also has a couple of handles–“thieves” and “wig”–which have a lot of associations that can be used to generate punch lines.

I started by brainstorming associations of “wig,” landing on “toupee.” That sounds like “to pay,” which reminded me of sayings like “crime doesn’t pay,” which are associated with the other handle, “thieves.” That’s how I found myself using Punch Line Maker #4: Find a play on words in the topic.

I wanted to end the joke on the “toupee” wordplay because Joke Maximizer #2 advises “End on the laugh trigger.” To do that, the most logical way to word the punch line would be something like “The police want the thieves toupee.”

But that punch line seemed to need an angle to set it up better. Plus I wanted to be sure that anybody hearing (not just reading) the joke would get the wordplay. And I thought I could work in a second laugh trigger.

So I put some wordplay in the angle too, a second type of wordplay which involves a word with two different meanings. The word, “combing,” is a second link between “thieves” and “wig.”

Some people think wordplay jokes are an inferior type of comedy, but not me. For more on this topic, read my article “Why Do People Not Like Puns?”

Posted in Joke Writing Workshop | Tags: puns, toupee, why do people hate puns, why do people hate wordplay, wigs, wordplay | Leave a comment |

Why Do People Not Like Puns?

Posted on July 15, 2016 by Joe Toplyn

A lot of people hate puns. They think puns aren’t funny. And often they’re right.

That’s because many puns lack one or more of the characteristics of a good joke.

For example, here’s the pun that, as I write this, has received the most votes on OneLineFun.com: “I’m glad I know sign language, it’s pretty handy.”

“I'm glad I know sign language, it's pretty handy.”

The reason that joke isn’t funny is because its topic—“I’m glad I know sign language”–isn’t true.

A good joke topic is true.

If you start a joke with a topic that your audience doesn’t believe, they’ll be focusing on that lie instead of paying attention to your joke.

Silvio Berlusconi signing

Your audience won’t be engaged by a topic that’s not true. Instead they’ll be thinking, “That guy doesn’t know sign language. He’s only saying he does to set up some tricky punch line to show us how clever he is.” Thus distracted, your audience won’t laugh.

Or take this next joke, #20 in an article on CollegeHumor.com entitled “20 Puns Even People Who Hate Puns Will Admit Are Good”:

A wall of china plates

The punch line of that joke–the photo of the plates–is visual. A visual punch line can theoretically get a laugh. But that visual punch line won’t because it’s not surprising.

A good punch line is surprising.

In a well-constructed joke, the topic and the angle (also known as the setup) lead the audience in a particular direction. The laugh comes when the punch line veers off suddenly in a new, unexpected direction.

But in the joke above, the setup (the words “Great Wall of China”) and the punch line (the photo of the plates) are both visible at exactly the same time. There’s no surprise in that, no sudden revelation of a truth, just, again, a demonstration of the writer’s cleverness.

But a punning joke that is well-constructed can get a big laugh.

For example, I wrote this joke and posted it on Comedywire.com:

Sheen pun

One reason that joke got a lot of votes is that it follows the rules of good joke-writing. The topic rings true: celebrities actually did pose for those photos. Who would make up an odd news item like that?

And the punch line is surprising. The wordplay–“crabs”–arrives at the very end of the joke, only after the topic and angle have misdirected the audience.

So don’t hate puns and other wordplay jokes. They’re not all bad, just the ones that are badly written.

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Finding a play on words in the joke topic is what I call Punch Line Maker #4. Learn five other Punch Line Makers, and many more comedy creation techniques, from my book, “Comedy Writing for Late-Night TV.”

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